Sunday, April 17, 2011

Poerty Analysis - Krista & Cassie

Poet- Sylvia Plath (1932-1963) 


Stillborn 


These poems do not live: it's a sad diagnosis. 
They grew their toes and fingers well enough, 
Their little foreheads bulged with concentration. 
If they missed out on walking about like people 
It wasn't for any lack of mother-love. 

O I cannot explain what happened to them! 
They are proper in shape and number and every part. 
They sit so nicely in the pickling fluid! 
They smile and smile and smile at me. 
And still the lungs won't fill and the heart won't start. 

They are not pigs, they are not even fish, 
Though they have a piggy and a fishy air - 
It would be better if they were alive, and that's what they were. 
But they are dead, and their mother near dead with distraction, 
And they stupidly stare and do not speak of her.



Stillborn or stillbirth means the birth of a baby who is born without any signs of life at or after 20 weeks through out pregnancy.  The baby may have died during pregnancy, labor or birth.  Knowing what the title means, will immediately give you a better interpretation for when you read the poem.
We can imagine after going through a tragic loss like this you would feel shocked, angry, angry at yourself, empty as a person, alone, depressed, or all your hopes, dreams and future are gone. 
-Sylvia had a miscarriage in her life time, now we see the connection between her life and the poem.  It seems like she had all those related feelings.  
-Plath grew up during the Great Depression and WW2.  That gives her another 'problem' to daze about.  
-diagnosis- determining by examination of a cause or a problem/situation.  
-she is possible finding out bad news about her pregnancy
-The first line could mean 'this isn't a good poem, it's bad news,'  by understanding this we can sense how the writer may have felt when she started to write the poem.  
- In the rest of the stanza it seems that she had twin fetuses that were well on their way of forming but never had a chance to see life and that she loved them. 
-The next stanza could mean she doesn't know what happened to them or she doesn't want to be reminded and write about it.  The fetuses were growing and sitting inside her so well until something must have gone wrong.  There are many possible reasons for a stillbirth to occur out of the blue.  
- 'They are not pigs, they are not even fish, Though they have a piggy and a fishy air' -This is hard to interpret, it could mean ' they don't breathe in oxygen like pigs do, nor breathe in a liquid like fish because they are dead and alive only in her heart.  
They were once alive and she wished they still were.  
- It seems she's distracted too much by them not being alive, that she's dying deep inside. 
-The last line could mean nobody in the hospital knows what to say about the situation, so they just look sympathetic.  Some people may hate sympathy but some people may think of it in a good way.  In this situation, I would hate to see the sympathy, I would want to leave and be alone.  

We knew from the beginning of the title, this would be a sad poem.

Krista & Cassie

Checked By: Chaz Gutmanis 

Monday, March 21, 2011

"The Boat" by Alistair MacLeod Assignment - KristaM and CassieS

1.   Lobb plot graph and key events of the story handed in separately.


2. a)      The narrator loves and favours his father, but he doesn't idealize him or his way of life.  The father is described to be disorderly, unkept, distant from his family and others, and sometimes turns out to have a temper with his wife.  Throughout the story the father seemed to be torn between the sea, books, and education.   He lived a life doing a job he disliked and never had the chance or oppurtunity to get a better education, make a better person of himself.  The narrator loved the sea and felt he should carry out the family business but at the end of the story, when his father dies, he decides to take his fathers advise and continue to strive for a better education.  In the future he finds himself, reading books, smoking cigarettes, and not completely happy with his job of being a university professor, similar to what his father was like.  The central character is the father, a fisherman who has never really liked the dangerous fishing lifestyle and who clearly would've preferred to get an education.   The central conflict is his mother doesn't share the same feeling about education and escaping from the fishing world that the father does.  She clearly doesn't want her family meeting the outside world, (not a life of the sea) and the narrator wants to study, but realizes that he loves the sea as well. 

3. a)      At first, the boat symbolizes how the father is imprisoned by his line of work because he never had the chance to get out and get a better education, do what he actually wanted to do in life, and to escape from the boat, he reads books.  The symbolism of the boat is transformed to symbolize a whole new meaning at the end of the story, a deeper meaning.  The father lived more of a life that his wife wanted rather than what he wanted.  The boat symbolizes you should always do what you want to do, what will make you happy and smile.  Don't do something you don't want to do because somebody else wants you to do it.  Always love yourself before you can love somebody else.  You don't want to live a life where you feel like your imprisoned, miserable.  

3.    In the beginning of The Boat the narrator is portrayed as a sea lover and it is very important to his life style. All this changes in the story when the narrator learns there is more to life then just the sea. He learns this from his father in the way that he used books to escape from the reality of his life. The father makes several comment in the story that indicate that he should pursue his education to ensure he doesn’t make the same mistakes. The end of the story leaves the narrator in a depression state. The mother lives alone and it sais she sends love towards the sea but bitterness upon her family. The father ends up dead beaten and destroyed by the very thing that controlled his life. The narrator grew up to be a professor and followed his education like his dad wanted but it doesn’t seem like he is happy or like it was even what he wanted. He grows up to be a mirror image of his father when the lesson he should have been teaching was to follow your dreams.

4.   
POWERFUL SENSES OF THE STORY
SIGHT-eyes
On page 270, the author made one really descriptive paragraph.  The narrator was describing a photo and by how descriptive it was, it gives us a powerful sense of sight.  After the father and tourists got together at their rented cabins, the father received a photo oh himself that day.  On the back of the picture it said, “To Our Ernest Hemingway,” who is an old writer.  That gives us a sense of what the father may have looked like.  If you read deeper into the paragraph, it describes what the photo looked like, so basically describing the father and the setting of where that picture was taken.  The narrator’s father looked ‘massive’, as he was sitting in a lawn chair with bulky fisherman clothes that were way to big.  He was shadowed by a beach umbrella that was protecting his sunburned face.  The father had cracked lips, flecks of blood on his teeth, wore brass bracelets on his wrists and a large leather belt, a shirt that would show his white chest hair, big blue eyes and white hair down to his shoulders.  Also, on page 274, the narrator does a great job describing more of his father, for us to get another powerful sense of sight.  His father has a reddish complection so he never tans, irritated skin from the salt water, cracked lips that bleed when he smiles, and oozing salt-water boils.
FEEL-hands
          On page 276, there's a very descriptive paragraph where it gives the reader a sense of how could it would feel there.  Reading it, put shivers down our spines.  It describes how the grey relentless waves of the Atlantic are very high and it's so cold it seems like they wouldn't have been able to see the surface of the water, due to the squalls of snow and storms.  From this you also get a sense of hearing.  Reading the words "howling winds",  gives the reader a sense of how it may sound.
SMELL-nose
            On page 262, we get a sense of how the father's boat or maybe even the whole setting of the story may smell.  It smelled of salt and fish and always had the same smell due to them living in Nova Scotia and near the sea.

5.   
Mother Character Sketch

The first mention of the mother is the story the boat is about her strong beliefs in order and cleanliness. This is shown when the narrator talks about how spotless she kept the house. It is also shown later in the story when the narrator describes how messy his father’s room was and how his mother refused to sleep there for she despised disorder in rooms and lives. The narrator also tells about how his mother loved the sea. You get the sense that the mother is very ignorant about any other lifestyle. This is shown when her daughters marry men who know nothing about the lifestyle at all and therefore she saw them as lazy, effeminate, dishonest and the unknown. From her making this conclusion I get the sense she is very traditional and unopen minded to any other tradition. You again know this when the narrator explains his mothers dislike for books and how see thinks they are a colossal waist of time and there is important work that should be done. In the end of the story when the father dyes and her daughters have all left to live their own lives as well as her son she is left with bitterness. In the story the boat the narrators mother is portrayed as selfish, controlling, stubborn, ignorant and very traditional. She also seems to have a great fear of change.

checked by: Mom

Thursday, February 24, 2011

I AM RICH - "Rich For One Day" Blog Assignment

                   I think that Aline in the short story "Rich For One Day" consideres herself rich, not with money, more as in happiness, feels great as a person, without money.  You can almost say sometimes the two words "rich" and "happiness" will have the same meaning or feeling behind it.
                  I myself am similar to Aline because I'm not rich, but I'm happy and when I feel happy,  I feel rich as a person.  One thing that I love that makes me feel happy is having a people who care and who will always be there for me, for they are really understanding.  The thought that I'm also really understable with them makes me happy because I'm not only receiving help, guidance, advise, whatever, I am also giving it to people I love and who love me back.  My job also makes me very happy.  Many people don't have one, and often struggle to even meet the basic/survival needs of life.  I am thankful for having a job right now that I don't hate.  If I really think about it, right now at this point of my life I have no problems.  I have a place to sleep, food to eat, water to drink, warmth, and people who love me.  I don't have to pay any expenses yet, my cell phone, that's it, and what I have for me going right now, is keeping me pretty happy I must say. 
                   You hear the phrase "money doesn't bring happiness" all the time, as you may see it everywhere too, and it's so true.  You just have to feel it, and to do that, you think to yourself, "what can be worse?"  There's always something worse out there in the world so just have faith.  One thing I learned from Aline's character is always decide to wake up and get up, you never know how your day might end.

checked by: Chaz Gutmanis

Wednesday, February 16, 2011

3 Ques.~ "The Lottery Ticket" - Dig Deep

1. Q: What's the main setting of this short story?  Is there more than one?
2. Q: What's ironic about the end of this short story?
3. Q: What's the hidden meaning/message behind this short story?
    A: A couple thinks they may have won the lottery and so they fantasize about how they would spend the winnings, getting more greedy each thought.  A theme Chekhov may have tried to demonstrate is you can't depend on something that's not there.  Don't expect anything if you didn't work for it or earn it in some kind of way, like winning a lottery.  There is such thing as luck to some, but you still have to roll the dice and get what you get, maybe not always be what you want and so you deal with what you have, even if you have to strive for happiness.  Anton presented us a life lesson: money does not buy happiness.

checked by: Chaz Gutmanis

What I Would Do With $100 Billion Dollars

                   Mr. Lobb, you should give that $100 billion dollars to me, Krista McLeod because I would make it last a lifetime, for myself and anybody who's dearly close to me such as family, best friends or even perhaps a lover.  I feel I would want to donate a reasonable amount of money to an animal shelter or of some other sort, one that I would support well.  I would also save a good portion of the money because you should always be prepared for the future, you can predict, but you'll never know for sure.  I would love to travel and that's something I'd definately spend money on, if i had it.  Of course I would need  someone who I love to come along and in my opinion, it would be a waste of time if I travelled the world alone.  No being selfish with the money, I'd do that by assisting anybody close to me of who I choose with any difficult expenses or a place to stay.  I love, the people I love, and I would do anything for them.  I'm not going to make a list of things I would buy with the money, but I would for sure try and fulfill most of my wants, needs, and dreams.  I keep in mind, that money doesn't always fulfill your wants and dreams, just usually what you need and what entertains you.  You can't forget about 'the love inside you.'  Of course I would need a lover to help me enjoy and spend some of that money.  The most important thing I can say, is never let money get to the best of you. That is why Mr. Lobb, i deserve that $100 billion dollars. 

checked by: Chaz Gutmanis